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Slur (Free verse) by MacFrantic

There's something in me Wild and broken Some will see And I will be devastation Completely fulfilling All words concerning The deliberate The unintentional And the fated There's something with me Wherever I run Everything around me grows Inky fans blow And wide streaks Of disappointment Disfigure my mantle Here I can show Nothingness and everything As one

half.italian 24-Oct-06/12:41 AM
I like it. It reads well. The one thing I would do: change 'devastation' to 'devastated' or something else entirely.




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