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Izzy's Last Night (Free verse) by jessicazee
I cry because you are moving to Minneapolis,
I have never been there, because Nick died there,
you canât die there, too.
I spilled all my guts to you last night
at the Y-Not III, my pinked parts, my crush,
my sad stories, you told jokes older than your own self,
George Carlinâs obituary is already wrote, by you,
you sewed two skull patches on one hoodie, your story,
blushing in punk rock surplus, I told you a butterfly
patch would be nice.
A butterfly, you said. A pretty one. With eyes in its wings.
I didnât disagree, our kiss shorter than Iâd hoped.
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Overall Rank: 10731
Posted: May 26, 2005 9:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2005 9:38 PM PDT
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