| Re: Yield by wilco |
29-Sep-05/9:47 PM |
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Absolutely stunning poetry! Picked up steam and ended perfectly. No need to be sung. *10* *10* *10*
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| Re: a comment on Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic |
30-Aug-05/6:03 PM |
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Damn it! You forgot your side-order of funny with your shit sandwich. Please, never deliver a low blow like poetry.com though. It disgraces the universe.
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| Re: War by zodiac |
3-Aug-05/2:57 PM |
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The title is strategically bland and I love the broken sentence structure. Always a fan of form. *10*
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| Re: a comment on Floss by jauser |
3-Aug-05/2:41 PM |
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| Re: a comment on On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic |
3-Aug-05/2:39 PM |
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It's, "as WELL as you write". Besides, I do comment as well as I farking write-if not better.
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| Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp |
2-Aug-05/1:32 PM |
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Absurd! Wonderfully Potato! Superb poem without the potatoing as well! *10*
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| Re: untitled by AaronJKeating |
2-Aug-05/11:08 AM |
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Glorious imagery. Just great. Loved it all the way. *10*
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| Re: Life is not serious by daggatolar |
2-Aug-05/11:07 AM |
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| Re: Mandrakes by Caducus |
2-Aug-05/11:05 AM |
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Strange...yet handy as an all-purpose stain remover and weather-resistant wood finish. *8*
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| Re: writers block by Jesus' Pedometer |
2-Aug-05/11:03 AM |
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Ha! Always an uphill...what's the word? Darn it! *9*
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| Re: HOW IT USUALLY ENDS! by pennymarie |
2-Aug-05/11:01 AM |
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The first stanza ruined it for me, sorry. *6*
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| Re: Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Aug-05/11:00 AM |
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| Re: Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Aug-05/10:59 AM |
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Better englsih translation and you've got a solid bedtime story here. *7*
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| Re: Floss by jauser |
2-Aug-05/10:57 AM |
How old are you? Are you expecting positive feedback with this load? Just use the word "fuck", nobody holds it against you. What we do hold against you is your poor spelling, rudimentary grammar, and total lack of poetic understanding. "Tragedic"? COME ON! *2*
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| Re: SO LONG MY BELOVED by prettyktm |
2-Aug-05/10:54 AM |
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Not too many soldiers pussy out like this, and please don't just repeat in the last stanza what you said in the first stanza. I know it's free verse, but the structuring is pitiful. *4*
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| Re: Forgiveness by Niphredil |
2-Aug-05/10:49 AM |
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Very good! I loved "before your blood congeals into hate". Could've done without the misplaced last line. *9*
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| Re: Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick |
2-Aug-05/10:47 AM |
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It would be more intriguing if it wasn't written like it just came out of "Where the Sidewalk Ends". *7*
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| Re: After He Left by Dovina |
2-Aug-05/10:44 AM |
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One of the best ending stanzas I have ever read, but the first one could use a bit of work. It makes sense, but the change in tenses and the last line-in the first stanza-is a bit grey. *9*
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| Re: a comment on Distance by MacFrantic |
9-Mar-05/4:54 PM |
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Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
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| Re: Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare |
8-Mar-05/9:53 PM |
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