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Floss (Free verse) by jauser Sometimes I'm scare, sometimes I'm not
I've been put here to stay, to rot
The meaning of life is to find yourself
Find your path and discover your direction
Pick yourself up from losses and rejection
Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great
Endless pain, endless hate
Tragedic incidents, life's obstacles brings me down to
Just like wood, rot
But I'll hang, live 'til I die, grow
The more one live the more one'll know
As long as I'm standing, 'll be nature
With my root I'll burst, mature
Up the ladder:
You Cared When
Down the ladder:
Yea u guys
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: August 1, 2005 10:40 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2005 10:40 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.37247 Overall Rank: 13036 Comments:
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Dovina @ 85.169.62.90
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2-Aug-05/8:16 AM
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Figure out what you want to say. Then say exactly that.
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jauser @ 4.241.15.145
> Dovina
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3-Aug-05/12:07 AM
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k
How old are you? Are you expecting positive feedback with this load? Just use the word "fuck", nobody holds it against you. What we do hold against you is your poor spelling, rudimentary grammar, and total lack of poetic understanding. "Tragedic"? COME ON! *2*
ok?
also, wtf? am I asking you to judge my shit? why does it bother you so much? for how old I am or nething about me or my shit? think u gotta have it your way don't u well guess what, no
re "am I asking you to judge my shit?"
Actually, yes. Poemranker is "a cross between imaginaries.org (an online writers' workshop) and RankPeople and Hot or Not" made to "Rank the works of others on a 1-10 scale or submit your own poems for ranking". So by posting here you're kind of asking for it. And MacFrantic cares how old you are because if you're 50 and you type like that you ought to be ashamed.
[lafs] ok.
Thanks much. Finally!
"Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great" <~ Outsider art
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