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Floss

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Aug 2005 · 9 comments

Sometimes I'm scare, sometimes I'm not I've been put here to stay, to rot The meaning of life is to find yourself Find your path and discover your direction Pick yourself up from losses and rejection Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great Endless pain, endless hate Tragedic incidents, life's obstacles brings me down to Just like wood, rot But I'll hang, live 'til I die, grow The more one live the more one'll know As long as I'm standing, 'll be nature With my root I'll burst, mature

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[2] Dovina 2-Aug-05/8:16 AM Reply

Figure out what you want to say. Then say exactly that.

[n/a] jauser › Dovina 3-Aug-05/12:07 AM Reply

[2] MacFrantic 2-Aug-05/10:57 AM Reply

How old are you? Are you expecting positive feedback with this load? Just use the word "fuck", nobody holds it against you. What we do hold against you is your poor spelling, rudimentary grammar, and total lack of poetic understanding. "Tragedic"? COME ON! *2*

[n/a] jauser › MacFrantic 3-Aug-05/12:06 AM Reply

ok?

[n/a] jauser › MacFrantic 3-Aug-05/12:08 AM Reply

also, wtf? am I asking you to judge my shit? why does it bother you so much? for how old I am or nething about me or my shit? think u gotta have it your way don't u well guess what, no

[5] zodiac › jauser 3-Aug-05/4:54 AM Reply

re "am I asking you to judge my shit?"

Actually, yes. Poemranker is "a cross between imaginaries.org (an online writers' workshop) and RankPeople and Hot or Not" made to "Rank the works of others on a 1-10 scale or submit your own poems for ranking". So by posting here you're kind of asking for it.

And MacFrantic cares how old you are because if you're 50 and you type like that you ought to be ashamed.

[n/a] jauser › zodiac 3-Aug-05/9:02 AM Reply

[lafs] ok.

[2] MacFrantic › zodiac 3-Aug-05/2:41 PM Reply

Thanks much. Finally!

[2] T. Jonathron Remp 3-Aug-05/1:34 PM Reply

"Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great" <~ Outsider art