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Mandrakes (Free verse) by Caducus Mandrakes flower on the surface.
Concealing a poisonous root.
All body shaped and soiled
It induces feelings of love
Which if tasted too much of
Will make you sleep forever.
I had a lover like this
She left herself
So I left her snapped
Poisoning the insects
Who licked her bitter sap
Boasting about their kill
As I buried the remnants
Of her self respect
In an unmarked grave in neon land.
Up the ladder:
The Old Boat
Down the ladder:
Cold
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Posted: August 1, 2005 9:31 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2005 9:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7996 Comments:
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Caducus @ 172.203.96.186
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1-Aug-05/9:32 AM
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granted - its rough as a rhinos arse please help.
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zodiac @ 212.118.19.75
> Caducus
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1-Aug-05/11:17 PM
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Use some other image. Sorry, that's the best I can do.
From what I can decipher. Your lover had crabs. So you "snapped" her neck and hid her corpse in a dumpster or something somewhere downtown.
I've alerted the authorities. the Feds should be knocking on your door any second now. The first verse is pretty good but then you get all psycho. Seems to be a trend among young male poem posters. Though you may not be either young or male for all I know.
Strange...yet handy as an all-purpose stain remover and weather-resistant wood finish. *8*
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