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Distance (Free verse) by MacFrantic An artistic lameness
The profound shake of lightning
From the odious firmament
Indicative of fate?
Worthy to call questionable?
Zeus readies his might
For another demonstration
And grips the unwieldy blade
Thunderous quills
Shine bright for but a moment
Reaffirming the doubts of man
Up the ladder:
Skeleton
Down the ladder:
any
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Posted: March 8, 2005 9:06 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2005 9:06 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8599 Comments:
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nentwined @ 64.60.192.130
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9-Mar-05/12:26 PM
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I don't get what you're trying to convey, here. :/
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MacFrantic @ 64.12.116.138
> nentwined
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9-Mar-05/4:54 PM
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Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
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