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Distance (Free verse) by MacFrantic
An artistic lameness The profound shake of lightning From the odious firmament Indicative of fate? Worthy to call questionable? Zeus readies his might For another demonstration And grips the unwieldy blade Thunderous quills Shine bright for but a moment Reaffirming the doubts of man

Up the ladder: Back Off
Down the ladder: Alive

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8672
Posted: March 8, 2005 9:06 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2005 9:06 PM PST
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[5] nentwined @ 64.60.192.130 | 9-Mar-05/12:26 PM | Reply
I don't get what you're trying to convey, here. :/
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 64.12.116.138 > nentwined | 9-Mar-05/4:54 PM | Reply
Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
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