Distance

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

An artistic lameness The profound shake of lightning From the odious firmament Indicative of fate? Worthy to call questionable? Zeus readies his might For another demonstration And grips the unwieldy blade Thunderous quills Shine bright for but a moment Reaffirming the doubts of man

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[5] nentwined 9-Mar-05/12:26 PM Reply

I don't get what you're trying to convey, here. :/

[n/a] MacFrantic › nentwined 9-Mar-05/4:54 PM Reply

Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.