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Distance (Free verse) by MacFrantic

An artistic lameness The profound shake of lightning From the odious firmament Indicative of fate? Worthy to call questionable? Zeus readies his might For another demonstration And grips the unwieldy blade Thunderous quills Shine bright for but a moment Reaffirming the doubts of man

nentwined 9-Mar-05/12:26 PM
I don't get what you're trying to convey, here. :/




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