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Suck

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

I could lay lame In the clutches of despair float hope past stone curtains and try to cry out I could stay the brach Or run my jaw about her while she whimpers But in this frightful calamity we groan and stray and when the dirges sound we scatter to be missing there She has belied herself to me aligned her shapes to settle all the thoughts that fight to escape from my worried brow

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[n/a] http://mulberryfairy 10-Jan-06/8:16 PM Reply
whose dirge- I got lost there- she is dead and therefore belied to your aliveness?
[n/a] Enkidu › http://mulberryfairy 11-Jan-06/10:14 PM Reply
yes, a ghost who has disguised herself as alive to make me calm
[n/a] MacFrantic › Enkidu 11-Jan-06/10:19 PM Reply
that's my comment, sorry.