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Suck (Free verse) by MacFrantic

I could lay lame In the clutches of despair float hope past stone curtains and try to cry out I could stay the brach Or run my jaw about her while she whimpers But in this frightful calamity we groan and stray and when the dirges sound we scatter to be missing there She has belied herself to me aligned her shapes to settle all the thoughts that fight to escape from my worried brow

MacFrantic 11-Jan-06/10:19 PM
that's my comment, sorry.




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