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Into the Shadows I Crawl (Free verse) by Silverjackel Into the shadows I crawl,
Your deepest secret I can see,
And this aggravates me
And builds my character.
Hidden far from your eyesight,
I feed off your emotions,
And when I feel the time is right,
That is when and only when I strike
Like a leopard with foot long claws.
And when my damage has been done,
I hide again and leave you to blame.
Naughty, naughty, it wasnât me,
For I am Anger and you see,
You cannot control me.
Up the ladder:
SHADOWS
Down the ladder:
Spoken word (draft)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: February 26, 2006 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2006 1:15 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9507 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 172.184.226.227
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26-Feb-06/10:58 AM
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Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
The title should be "Anger" or somesuch, I think. Why would "this aggravates me" be true? Otherwise good.
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