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Into the Shadows I Crawl (Free verse) by Silverjackel

Into the shadows I crawl, Your deepest secret I can see, And this aggravates me And builds my character. Hidden far from your eyesight, I feed off your emotions, And when I feel the time is right, That is when and only when I strike Like a leopard with foot long claws. And when my damage has been done, I hide again and leave you to blame. Naughty, naughty, it wasn’t me, For I am Anger and you see, You cannot control me.

Dovina 27-Feb-06/6:26 PM
The title should be "Anger" or somesuch, I think. Why would "this aggravates me" be true? Otherwise good.




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