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Pain, I Curse Thee (Free verse) by woodstock20000
Curse you Pain! I curse you to the depths of Hades; for you ravage my children of their hope, and leave them lost in the darkness - to spawn more of your demonic children. May you die may you parish without a glimmer of goodbye For I shall greet your death with laughter and shall cry no more forever after.

Up the ladder: My first Haiku
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10919
Posted: January 17, 2006 7:24 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2006 7:24 PM PST
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[7] MacFrantic @ 172.197.129.206 | 17-Jan-06/10:49 PM | Reply
I don't know why, but I like this.P-e-rish *7*
[7] Dovina @ 17.255.240.138 | 18-Jan-06/11:13 AM | Reply
I think you should tell us what kind of pain you are talking about.
[6] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 19-Jan-06/1:41 PM | Reply
I haven't heard a more redundant cry of anguish since, "Damn, you all, to hell!" or one of my favorites, "KAAAAHN!".
[6] zodiac @ 209.193.14.236 | 19-Jan-06/2:15 PM | Reply
I just saw Pain and, man, he's shaking in his boots.
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