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Free verse № 137070

Pain, I Curse Thee

Member since 2005 · Posted 17 Jan 2006 · 4 comments

Curse you Pain! I curse you to the depths of Hades; for you ravage my children of their hope, and leave them lost in the darkness - to spawn more of your demonic children. May you die may you parish without a glimmer of goodbye For I shall greet your death with laughter and shall cry no more forever after.

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[7] MacFrantic 17-Jan-06/10:49 PM Reply
I don't know why, but I like this.P-e-rish *7*
[7] Dovina 18-Jan-06/11:13 AM Reply
I think you should tell us what kind of pain you are talking about.
[6] ALChemy 19-Jan-06/1:41 PM Reply
I haven't heard a more redundant cry of anguish since, "Damn, you all, to hell!" or one of my favorites, "KAAAAHN!".
[6] zodiac 19-Jan-06/2:15 PM Reply
I just saw Pain and, man, he's shaking in his boots.