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Even the score (Lyric) by Miggy
I am not one to admit defeat Ever since you ended all what was there for me But now, you try still so constantly To mess up, to disrupt my entire life again (Chorus) You aim to stab me in the heart again ‘Cause it wasn’t enough that I don’t take you as a friend And so, you look to make sure I’m all alone Since I proved you wrong you try to now even the score It rains because I leave her for the night Not because I remember you never treated me right Even though you say you go on with your life You never give up, resign to the fact I’m happy again (Chorus) And you pester me With constant reminding That you still exist in this world I threw away my past In your sentimental trash Hoping that you will learn (Chorus) It wasn’t worth it for you to pretend With all the burdens you must deal with in the end And though you made it seem I was only there for show There is no amount of anger for me to try to even the score Even the score And yet I never try To even the score

Up the ladder: Taste Your Cocky Ego
Down the ladder: My first Haiku

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10922
Posted: May 30, 2005 7:18 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2005 7:18 PM PDT
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[2] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 30-May-05/7:27 PM | Reply
<< to try to even the score
Even the score
And yet I never try
To even the score >>

Perhaps this is breathtaking when screamed into the microphone by a voluptuous blonde with black&blue lipstick and lots of tattoos, but as reading material it's a pover experience. And having to climb over '(chorus)' three times doesn't add to the spree
[n/a] zodiac @ 213.186.191.78 > deleted user | 31-May-05/5:48 AM | Reply
Trying to imagine Miggy as a voluptuous blonde with blue&black lipstick and lots of tattoos just caused me to "expend myself".
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