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Haiku № 103680

My first Haiku

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 May 2004 · 4 comments

Just five syllables? But I want to use seven! Ok, I'll use five

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4 comments

[7] nentwined 29-May-04/7:40 PM Reply
this more properly goes in the 'metaku' category.

cute, though.
[10] sliver 30-May-04/6:48 AM Reply
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
[8] Fayt 7-Mar-06/10:53 AM Reply
Simple, yet funny.

I like it.

=)
[0] dclark 6-Aug-07/11:33 AM Reply
Can you not write a better Haiku than a 5th grader?