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My first Haiku (Haiku) by DJCopasetic
Just five syllables? But I want to use seven! Ok, I'll use five
Up the ladder: Pawn
Down the ladder: Pain, I Curse Thee
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10918
Posted: May 29, 2004 7:01 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2004 7:01 PM PDT
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[7] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 29-May-04/7:40 PM | Reply
this more properly goes in the 'metaku' category.

cute, though.
[10] sliver @ 66.87.134.129 | 30-May-04/6:48 AM | Reply
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
[8] Fayt @ 141.157.35.222 | 7-Mar-06/10:53 AM | Reply
Simple, yet funny.

I like it.

=)
[0] dclark @ 67.140.204.211 | 6-Aug-07/11:33 AM | Reply
Can you not write a better Haiku than a 5th grader?
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