| Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
28-Jan-06/2:07 AM |
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| Re: The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic |
10-Feb-06/3:47 PM |
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oops, *they're*, goddamn it
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| Re: writer's block by Zoetrope |
10-Feb-06/3:52 PM |
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Impressive, in a word. *10*
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| Re: Sunday i will dream again by Caducus |
21-Feb-06/6:28 AM |
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This is very satisfying, but a few of the adj's seem forced. A I wish I could give you a 9.5, because with a couple tweaks this is an 11 for me. *9*
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| Re: lost souls by aamir_trichy |
21-Feb-06/6:30 AM |
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Ugh, this caves in fast. *4*
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| Re: An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta |
26-Feb-06/10:53 AM |
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This is okay, a bit roundabout, I liked the Love of God theme and the ending. Could've been better *7*
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26-Feb-06/10:56 AM |
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The pace of this poem is superb, yet the syntax is strange. Very nice. *8*
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| Re: Into the Shadows I Crawl by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/10:58 AM |
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Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
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| Re: My Shattered Love by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/11:01 AM |
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I just don't know, this is better than your other post, but the adj's seem extremely forced and the scheme is too formulaic. It makes you isolate and search for rhyme. *6*
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| Re: Today's Spam by nentwined |
26-Feb-06/11:03 AM |
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Not the best, but entertaining. *7*
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| Re: Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/11:06 AM |
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| Re: Desperate Revival by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/11:10 AM |
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This is really pretty ugly. You need to stop using a dictionary, and if you are not, learn to simplify your language and still convey the same message. You conflate garbage words like "mope" with a misplace "inaugurate". *5*
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| Re: Rambling by terbenaw |
26-Feb-06/11:13 AM |
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This is actually pretty good. It's a lot better than it should be. *9*
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| Re: Harp Song of the Prawne Men by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
26-Feb-06/11:16 AM |
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Magnifico! I love this. Ahaha. *sigh* *10*
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| Re: Mid-July by Ranger |
18-Mar-06/12:04 AM |
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Pretty good, true to form. A bit of an awkward read, something about the rhythm. Still enjoyable. *8*
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| Re: Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0 |
18-Mar-06/12:08 AM |
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Good "conversational" piece, but a bit lacking as a poem. Was "elementry" intentional? Please say it was. *6*
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| Re: The Peccadillary by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
18-Mar-06/12:12 AM |
Sweet lord 'twas remarkable. I do hope you do more. Particularly funny: "To go on a bender with communion wine." and "To address a Knight of the Realm as a 'Mr'." *10*
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29-Mar-06/10:54 AM |
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This is really good. I am astounded by the quality of your poetry. *9*
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4-Apr-06/11:36 PM |
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Good, not great, but good. *7*
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| Re: Explorations Underground by ecargo |
4-Apr-06/11:40 PM |
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I love the last line, money. *9*
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