| Re: Breakdown of Poetry by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/9:28 PM |
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| Re: I Can't Believe You by Katzclear |
17-Nov-03/7:50 PM |
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Well lads this looks to me like a gay friend & nothing more, losing out to a girl:o)
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| Re: Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Nov-03/7:37 PM |
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:o) but cud do better with the end ( but ill just give u a 10)
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| Re: Pride by Art Glocken |
17-Nov-03/9:12 AM |
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Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
17-Nov-03/5:43 AM |
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Well said and done - But am afraid not wortha zero nor a ten. So hows a Ronaldo 9 to pemper your stick:o)
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| Re: The Balcony Boys by Shardik |
17-Nov-03/12:06 AM |
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| Re: The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-Nov-03/8:46 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Hansel & Gratel by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/9:09 AM |
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well you better not ask to hold hands:o)
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| Re: a comment on Hansel & Gratel by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/8:58 AM |
Well Shuushin, the evil twist i tried to bring slowly but didnt want the piece to be 2 long and boring. But thanx fr your pointers ill rem it and try 2 tackle it a little slow at start & make it a little neat fr most readers..
Critics are the maker n breakers and they are seldom wrong and never right:o)
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| Re: A Coven of Toes by sixtoedwonder |
16-Nov-03/6:59 AM |
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ill do just that mate ( Later on dont say i took ya pants:o)
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| Re: To Fly by amielou82 |
16-Nov-03/6:50 AM |
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| Re: Hansel & Gratel by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/6:47 AM |
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Remind me not to read stories to little sis - it beats the crap out of me:o)
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| Re: Sagittarius by INTRANSIT |
16-Nov-03/6:31 AM |
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| Re: WASTED by titan69 |
16-Nov-03/6:28 AM |
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Frankly young crows 2 are found in this land:o(
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| Re: a comment on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus |
16-Nov-03/6:23 AM |
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i thought u had none;souls baby:o)
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| Re: Koori by amielou82 |
16-Nov-03/6:20 AM |
Well Koori's are dead, only outcasts and half bloods remain and we the Lords will not permit the bitches to run out and take our lands...Nor do i trust, nor of them will i gain...No is the answer...No is the way..So hows a 9 sound for this wishing rant:o)
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| Re: I AM... by CHUNMOON |
16-Nov-03/6:11 AM |
"THE SEASONS OF A YEAR" is finite - 04in most cases but down here in Maldives its 02; but liked the idea behind it
Second of all get a word processor:o) cause "I AM THE VIOCE THAT I SING" - ring any bells, or should i underline it for you.
All in all its worth a 8from this heathen, cause I AM...
TKAE IT AND BE DNOE WTIH IT:o)
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| Re: a comment on Me and my 'ompanion by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/5:51 AM |
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well now u tell me. After all is said and done:o)
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| Re: a comment on The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/5:48 AM |
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Better yet i'll show you:o)
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| Re: a comment on The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Nov-03/5:46 AM |
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Take the blue pill and i will tell you 2 :o)
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