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Pride (Free verse) by Art Glocken its difficult to think that a few moments
ago i was going to win
but now i'm on my knees,
watching everyone run into the distance
all because i didnt tie my lace
i always knew this would happen
3months of hard training
the problem being that i didnt cheat
my egg wasnt glued to the spoon
the others must have cheated.
Up the ladder:
Little Miss Ogyny
Down the ladder:
bitch
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Posted: July 29, 2002 5:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 5:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0672355 Overall Rank: 6635 Comments:
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itchiwitch @ 203.97.2.243
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29-Jul-02/6:18 AM
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I like this. So typically human.
Art Glocken is my favourite poem. He is to poems what Damien Beckham is to football....awesome....whens the book out?
Are you an athlete? Or a poet? Make up your mind.
Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(
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