Pride

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

its difficult to think that a few moments ago i was going to win but now i'm on my knees, watching everyone run into the distance all because i didnt tie my lace i always knew this would happen 3months of hard training the problem being that i didnt cheat my egg wasnt glued to the spoon the others must have cheated.

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4 comments

[5] itchiwitch 29-Jul-02/6:18 AM Reply

I like this. So typically human.

[10] johnnyfontaine23 29-Jul-02/9:51 AM Reply

Art Glocken is my favourite poem. He is to poems what Damien Beckham is to football....awesome....whens the book out?

[10] Mister Cakes 29-Jul-02/2:25 PM Reply

Are you an athlete? Or a poet? Make up your mind.

[5] ShaNoN+960317485 17-Nov-03/9:12 AM Reply

Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(