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Pride (Free verse) by Art Glocken

its difficult to think that a few moments ago i was going to win but now i'm on my knees, watching everyone run into the distance all because i didnt tie my lace i always knew this would happen 3months of hard training the problem being that i didnt cheat my egg wasnt glued to the spoon the others must have cheated.

ShaNoN+960317485 17-Nov-03/9:12 AM
Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(




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