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Me and my 'ompanion (Free verse) by ShaNoN+960317485
You are ho’ny I now come Now and now Of you I lust Brass after asked I now give’m Now and now After my thrust A raise she gives I now hav’em Now and now I lose the erection Down in a lip I now rub tongue Now and now As I lose traction Mount her little I now hul’a hump Now and now I prob’er postern Small little fruition Swells my pride Now and now As I suck her button Swells or fire I now have fury Now and now I bite her bosom She slips out Cups my beating ‘rivy Now and now As squirts I her front Smack my thy I now become ‘imp Now and now She amass her posse'sion Till I am ho’ny Till it comes Now and now To meet in such fash'on

Up the ladder: Birth
Down the ladder: Nothing you can say

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 6.5241184
Overall Rank: 667
Posted: November 12, 2003 6:20 AM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2003 6:20 AM PST
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[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 12-Nov-03/6:21 AM | Reply
'ope u 'eet ya 'ompanion 2 :o)
[6] ____________________ @ 195.157.153.253 | 12-Nov-03/6:27 AM | Reply
Piss ye off, mo fo.

This poem reminds me of James Whitcomb Riley. See, for example, the following:

http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem1706.html

http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem1703.html

[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 > ____________________ | 12-Nov-03/8:00 PM | Reply
Must be that i am a reincarnate of JW.Riley :o) One never knows - thanx fr the URL, looks worth reading, thnx
[7] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105 | 12-Nov-03/7:04 AM | Reply
Walt Whitman fantasizing he's straight and dildoing a girl? What?????? 7 for the strange factor.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 12-Nov-03/11:28 AM | Reply
The rantings of an antlered dildo.
[8] deleted user @ 211.24.241.13 | 13-Nov-03/11:12 PM | Reply
Good for an SHM.
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 > deleted user | 14-Nov-03/2:03 AM | Reply
You seems 2 always think of masturbation & nothing more:o)
[8] deleted user @ 211.24.241.13 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 14-Nov-03/2:23 AM | Reply
What were u thinking ;) more than masterbating??? huh :o)
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 > deleted user | 14-Nov-03/10:51 PM | Reply
i was thinking abt that girl/whore living near your place:o)
[8] deleted user @ 202.1.201.234 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 15-Nov-03/4:06 AM | Reply
Yak!!
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 > deleted user | 16-Nov-03/5:51 AM | Reply
well now u tell me. After all is said and done:o)
[8] deleted user @ 202.1.201.234 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 16-Nov-03/8:41 PM | Reply
Well-done
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