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Sagittarius (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Arrows of truth Heart of man trunk of horse pulls all that he can. "I'd rather have bad poets than warring ones"!

Down the ladder: suppose (a warm sun)

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Weighted score: 6.820314
Overall Rank: 370
Posted: November 15, 2003 9:12 AM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2003 9:12 AM PST
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[9] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 15-Nov-03/10:48 AM | Reply
Roger that; nicely done.

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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 15-Nov-03/12:19 PM | Reply
And that's why you settled for driving a truck in life.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.198 > horus8 | 15-Nov-03/12:45 PM | Reply
Settled? Hardly. I'm fighting it as we speak. I've done it for long enough to say: Been there done that, can I move on now?
where do you think that horse poem came from? and the fact that "freedom" is a recurring theme in my poems. Really now. You think I settled? You know me better than that. Or so I'd hoped.
[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 > INTRANSIT | 15-Nov-03/6:20 PM | Reply
You're right, I'm sorry dude, that fucking bastard has got me pissed off is all. I appologies. You know I love ya.
[9] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 16-Nov-03/6:31 AM | Reply
Amen..Or was it A man:o)
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