Re: No more goodbye by ShaNoN+960317485	2-Feb-05/4:52 AM
Its been a while but hope you guys are doing fine - Cheers ShaNoN
Re: a comment on Santa’s Journal 25thDec2003 by ShaNoN+960317485	29-Dec-03/6:53 PM
Man, thanx fr that:o)
Re: a comment on Santa’s Journal 25thDec2003 by ShaNoN+960317485	29-Dec-03/6:52 PM
Thanx, would keep that in mind fr next time :o)
Re: Santa’s Journal 25thDec2003 by ShaNoN+960317485	29-Dec-03/1:31 AM
Was sitting on it since 25thDec, but did not find time till now. Hope it was a great Holiday n Happy New Year to all o'ya. Cheers
Re: Advice to poets I am passing on from CHARLES DARWIN by Plaidypus	27-Dec-03/8:54 PM
true 2 the font that ye typed
Re: It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos	27-Dec-03/6:12 AM
ok u have my attention on this one - hows abt a freakin 10
Re: If I can't swim there I'll float by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Dec-03/5:28 AM
more like you'd be crazy, cold and wishing you be dead.
Re: Love Is In The Air by Blindpoetry	27-Dec-03/5:23 AM
sounds more like a craving to me - wud never call it love
Re: Dream Me by jasondingus	27-Dec-03/5:21 AM
Lets Dream me giving you a ten not a nine
Re: a comment on Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485	21-Dec-03/2:04 AM
ill take it as a compliment:o) which i am sure was never ya intent Tc
Re: a comment on Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485	21-Dec-03/2:02 AM
we have a sayin in Maldives, which goes somethin like - "The meaning of a poem is in the stomatch of the poet" its kinda what u feel i guess. Tc n thnx
Re: I'm A Root by Blindpoetry	20-Dec-03/1:24 AM
Ya i know what it is u sez . meself is living in Maldives, a small land where small is populaz n nobody goez..Little ground 2 cover no place to trot...Yez i understand whats u got... :o)
Re: Questions Need Answers by Blindpoetry	20-Dec-03/1:19 AM
Leave it b as it is... A question i can ask is, u trying 2 be a rapper cause me think u tryin/is sounding a itsy like one:o) i stopd at "The rain has drained " otherwise OK on my book
Re: Digging A Grave by Blindpoetry	20-Dec-03/1:14 AM
And stop it shall? i dont know i can fullfill ya request fr critic i am not that gud...but i think each of us can help eachh other.. for starters: 1-"I'm trying to do the same with this bad memory" wud b better if u did away with 'with this bad', it kinda drags the idea. 2-"The grave is taking out the sad" i think i understand what you mean - but a little rearranging cud/might make it better On the whole the piece aint super nor is it bad..enough fr me 2 give u a 10 atleast.. :o) TC
Re: Surfacing by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Dec-03/12:59 AM
Hello Dear. how u doing?? I see that you also talk to a DICK, Casually caressing it :o) Well dear dont know much abt what u try us to c... so i cud say Surfacing is a person & his penis relationship.. the reasons been: 1-'I find you a giver': a giver o sperm 2-'warm to the touch': it sure is warm 3-'and a free radical': yes has a will of its own (i know) 4-'Curly long & supple': During the placid state its skin is surly coiled . 5- the rest put forth the reverie of thoughts of the person, claiming that though he had kept Mr.Penis to himself its use liberates him & lets him feel love – which hence he claims Mr.Penis ‘you are the worlds’. Sounds funny dho...but i have an evil mind & my Mr.Penis is also just the same;o) A cool verse even if i ignore this complex inference.. Take a 9 baby..
Re: If you pimp me I'll stay Walter by Shardik	20-Dec-03/12:36 AM
Must u always spoil Easter Shardik? You and your Walter, with a six penny pole thats been dead fr a decade... :o)
Re: Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485	20-Dec-03/12:27 AM
Ye a modern man with schooling we all shall aspire for...
Re: a comment on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485	19-Dec-03/11:18 PM
The numbers reflect my home number - just fr identity sake, cause there are lota people named Shanon... But if u dare 2 contact me direct use me HP# +960708922. :o)
Re: a comment on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485	18-Dec-03/10:10 AM
may the force b with ya little bum 2:o) cause Frodo hath already put off the war of the ages pass whilst he hath done his frolic in the mount of doom...just as dare gather our bundles and hang our socks fr the Christmas come...HO ho n a lota cheers 2 ya all on Christmas that tumbles to ye door front...I give ya'll a wonderful years End 2....
Re: a comment on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485	18-Dec-03/10:04 AM
hello richa - sad that i didnt ya, but the trainer ws pokin her nose abt so i got it down as it came 2 me n put it down on the site. Yet smote be i fr not taking time to reflect...cheers:o)