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Surfacing (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}> I find you a giver
warm to the touch
and a free radical.
Curly long & supple
your hair tied to
mine and spin we a
galaxy of babies.
Upon surfacing, I
know what love is
and you take me down
and I hold my breath
and I forgive even
the Sun for seeing
You.
Because, you are not mine
only, you are the worlds.
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Posted: December 18, 2003 9:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2003 9:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.8836646 Overall Rank: 1526 Comments:
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I see that you also talk to a DICK, Casually caressing it :o)
Well dear dont know much abt what u try us to c... so i cud say Surfacing is a person & his penis relationship..
the reasons been:
1-'I find you a giver': a giver o sperm
2-'warm to the touch': it sure is warm
3-'and a free radical': yes has a will of its own (i know)
4-'Curly long & supple': During the placid state its skin is surly coiled .
5- the rest put forth the reverie of thoughts of the person, claiming that though he had kept Mr.Penis to himself its use liberates him & lets him feel love â which hence he claims Mr.Penis âyou are the worldsâ.
Sounds funny dho...but i have an evil mind & my Mr.Penis is also just the same;o)
A cool verse even if i ignore this complex inference..
Take a 9 baby..