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Surfacing (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

I find you a giver warm to the touch and a free radical. Curly long & supple your hair tied to mine and spin we a galaxy of babies. Upon surfacing, I know what love is and you take me down and I hold my breath and I forgive even the Sun for seeing You. Because, you are not mine only, you are the worlds.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Dec-03/12:39 PM
You must work at the makeup counter at Sears too. Glad to know you.




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