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Questions Need Answers (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
I see blackness My life is factless Its destroyed Its Devoid I can't control the anger My eye is twitching and other things are getting stranger I thought I knew life But instead of spectating, i had to feel the knife The rain has drained ; Sun is shining Sun has no "happy" effect over my selfish whining Leave me alone Answers in life - I'm in the middle of finding... - spence

Up the ladder: Flicking
Down the ladder: Sleep

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2608
Posted: December 19, 2003 8:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 8:48 AM PST
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[9] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 20-Dec-03/1:19 AM | Reply
Leave it b as it is...
A question i can ask is, u trying 2 be a rapper cause me think u tryin/is sounding a itsy like one:o)
i stopd at "The rain has drained " otherwise OK on my book

[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 21-Dec-03/5:03 PM | Reply
lol No, I'm am anti-rap ... :-P But I see how it sounds like it...
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