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Questions Need Answers (Pimple) by Blindpoetry I see blackness
My life is factless
Its destroyed
Its Devoid
I can't control the anger
My eye is twitching and other things are getting stranger
I thought I knew life
But instead of spectating, i had to feel the knife
The rain has drained ; Sun is shining
Sun has no "happy" effect over my selfish whining
Leave me alone
Answers in life - I'm in the middle of finding... - spence
Up the ladder:
Alone
Down the ladder:
dancing on air
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Posted: December 19, 2003 8:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 8:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2618 Comments:
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A question i can ask is, u trying 2 be a rapper cause me think u tryin/is sounding a itsy like one:o)
i stopd at "The rain has drained " otherwise OK on my book