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Everyone (Free verse) by nothingtoanyone
The river of monotonous misery that over flows into the worlds streets. Making fools of everyday people. Go for the flow fall into the waters pull that has seemed to capture everyone else. Everything and anything that comes past you and enters your mind is the exhaust of every other person around you.
Up the ladder: almost cognizant
Down the ladder: Leaving in the Morning
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2605
Posted: May 5, 2004 11:07 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 11:07 PM PDT
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[10] Everyone @ 195.157.153.253 | 6-May-04/1:42 AM | Reply
Nice to see a poeme about me at last.

Your friend,

Everyone.
[8] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 6-May-04/11:59 AM | Reply
Should that be "flow. Fall"? The last line is good, but I'd leave out "Everything and"
[10] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.72.80.61 | 8-May-04/6:16 PM | Reply
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