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Questions Need Answers (Pimple) by Blindpoetry

I see blackness My life is factless Its destroyed Its Devoid I can't control the anger My eye is twitching and other things are getting stranger I thought I knew life But instead of spectating, i had to feel the knife The rain has drained ; Sun is shining Sun has no "happy" effect over my selfish whining Leave me alone Answers in life - I'm in the middle of finding... - spence

ShaNoN+960317485 20-Dec-03/1:19 AM
Leave it b as it is...
A question i can ask is, u trying 2 be a rapper cause me think u tryin/is sounding a itsy like one:o)
i stopd at "The rain has drained " otherwise OK on my book





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