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No more goodbye (Free verse) by ShaNoN+960317485 Will not say goodbye nor will I sigh
Will not dare wave nor will I stand by
âWill notâ, I say but will miss you smile
The bubbles of laughter and the great times
For leaving is my friend, my life
Over an ocean to the horizon neigh
So what I must say I must say now
May the hands of hour lift you kind
Over the grief and bitters of everyday life
Till meet we again, you and I.
Up the ladder:
forgotten
Down the ladder:
am i on speaker phone? good~
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Posted: February 1, 2005 10:19 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2005 10:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10148 Comments:
Need to fix your meter here and check your spelling.
I will "miss you smile" too, dunce.
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Cheers ShaNoN