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No more goodbye

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Feb 2005 · 3 comments

Will not say goodbye nor will I sigh Will not dare wave nor will I stand by âWill notâ, I say but will miss you smile The bubbles of laughter and the great times For leaving is my friend, my life Over an ocean to the horizon neigh So what I must say I must say now May the hands of hour lift you kind Over the grief and bitters of everyday life Till meet we again, you and I.

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[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 2-Feb-05/4:52 AM Reply

Its been a while but hope you guys are doing fine -

Cheers ShaNoN

[5] wilco 2-Feb-05/3:10 PM Reply

Need to fix your meter here and check your spelling.

[5] horus8 2-Feb-05/6:57 PM Reply

I will "miss you smile" too, dunce.