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No more goodbye (Free verse) by ShaNoN+960317485

Will not say goodbye nor will I sigh Will not dare wave nor will I stand by ‘Will not’, I say but will miss you smile The bubbles of laughter and the great times For leaving is my friend, my life Over an ocean to the horizon neigh So what I must say I must say now May the hands of hour lift you kind Over the grief and bitters of everyday life Till meet we again, you and I.

wilco 2-Feb-05/3:10 PM
Need to fix your meter here and check your spelling.




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