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some simplicity stings.

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

i waited for your hands to cool. my blistered skin was clenching in, recoiling from your sudden touch. your passion burns my face too much. so waiting for your eyes to shut, my own lids lifted clocks were clicking. sandy from your beach-bleached stare, your gaze has scratched an image there.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/1:09 AM Reply
An encounter with a bearded old man using noxema as lubrication?