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Love Is In The Air (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Love is in the air, But I never did care, Until Today, When my life started to decay, But then I find something, I couldn’t feel it coming, But it was Love. Is Love an artificial sweetener? Or is it just a creature? Can it be true? Or can it be blue? I have never experienced this thing, Until right before my moving, And I know I’d have to find another, Or suffer my parents thunder. I think its Love.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.8333335
Overall Rank: 1623
Posted: December 25, 2003 8:02 PM PST; Last modified: December 25, 2003 8:02 PM PST
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[8] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 27-Dec-03/5:23 AM | Reply
sounds more like a craving to me - wud never call it love
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.240.218 | 27-Dec-03/3:58 PM | Reply
Can it [love] be blue?

Well yes, on film it can. Having said that love in this situation can be rather euphemistic.
[6] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:40 PM | Reply
You could do with a few apostrophes in the right places.
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