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Tears (Other) by tori I cried for everyone,
Whose life slipped away so quickly,
And I poured my heart out,
When you left me so swiftly,
Leaving me to nothing,
Nothing but my tears,
Nothing, not even a goodbye,
Only my tears
Up the ladder:
Lunacy
Down the ladder:
Sustained
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Posted: October 24, 2003 5:59 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 5:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.8333335 Overall Rank: 1621 Comments:
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Miggy @ 207.38.251.108
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24-Oct-03/6:55 PM
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nice job for a first publish (8)
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