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We Are Still Friends (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Seeing your face Makes my heart beat at a faster pace Seeing those eyes Makes me realize The beauty you have The beauty you hold The beauty I crave And the way your lips unfold I am still thinking Your still the one I am still thinking Without you its no fun Let me be your buddy Let me be your friend If we can't be together "friends" is what I recommend Put the past behind us Don't let it find us Stash it in a secret place Give it a new face Let it be friendship Let it be friendship And don't let it be awkward again

Up the ladder: Sustained
Down the ladder: Epistemology (2nd draft)

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.8333335
Overall Rank: 1627
Posted: December 23, 2003 7:38 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2003 7:38 PM PST
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 | 23-Dec-03/8:42 PM | Reply
This reminds of that time... When I was born... A magical nurses' mask said...
And everyone fucking laughed at me.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 27-Dec-03/10:02 PM | Reply
yep. thats a pimple alright.

good ending.
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