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If I can't swim there I'll float (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
It's horribly lonely out here
Floating on this charred seat
Counting the fins of predators
Wondering if I'm going to sunburn.
It's terribly chilly out here
Turning the clouds into smoke gods
Measuring the buoyancy of salt to fresh
Wondering if I should have ate those peanuts?
The guy holding onto the toilet
has long since disappeared, and
I'm beginning to think that it might
be a safer place too bob later.
It's dreadfully reminding out here
Black and yellow jacket stars.
Perhaps, even whole galaxies...
Tonight, I have a feeling.
I'll probably freeze to death
while getting there.
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Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2350
Posted: December 23, 2003 9:17 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2003 9:19 PM PST
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