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I'm A Root (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
All my friends are out tonight And I am bored as Hell All my friends are out tonight Where am I? No one can really tell I've been in my room for ages I think its time for some changes There all out in the mall Buying new clothes I wouldn't mind a new suit -There the leaves and I'm the root... I'm the root deep in the pot I'm lonely cause I'm the only one in this spot And I think my social life has been put to a stop I really wish my life would stop I wish to hang with my pal I wish to hang with my gal But people say "I gotta stop" Cause I'm living in a pot I soak up the water Created by my tears of loneliness I grow taller But nobody knows -Because I hang where nobody goes-

Up the ladder: Three Bears
Down the ladder: Soccer

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3330
Posted: December 19, 2003 8:35 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 8:35 AM PST
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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 20-Dec-03/1:24 AM | Reply
Ya i know what it is u sez . meself is living in Maldives, a small land where small is populaz n nobody goez..Little ground 2 cover no place to trot...Yez i understand whats u got...
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