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Free verse № 78000

I'm A Root

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

All my friends are out tonight And I am bored as Hell All my friends are out tonight Where am I? No one can really tell I've been in my room for ages I think its time for some changes There all out in the mall Buying new clothes I wouldn't mind a new suit -There the leaves and I'm the root... I'm the root deep in the pot I'm lonely cause I'm the only one in this spot And I think my social life has been put to a stop I really wish my life would stop I wish to hang with my pal I wish to hang with my gal But people say "I gotta stop" Cause I'm living in a pot I soak up the water Created by my tears of loneliness I grow taller But nobody knows -Because I hang where nobody goes-

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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 20-Dec-03/1:24 AM Reply
Ya i know what it is u sez . meself is living in Maldives, a small land where small is populaz n nobody goez..Little ground 2 cover no place to trot...Yez i understand whats u got...
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