poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ShaNoN+960317485 (21-40) and replies

Comments byShaNoN+960317485, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485 18 Dec 2003, 10:01 AM
of which i hope u hv the total sum 2, cause i have it all n much more:o)
on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485 16 Dec 2003, 11:45 PM
Srry that i cant b here in Poemranker more often - been in a training n still am. Hope 2 read ya guys/gals stuff once i finish this arse grinding.

Cheers friends
on An Ode to Gobbling by horus8 29 Nov 2003, 4:53 AM
good insanity in a big bang:o)
on People of Discord by ShaNoN+960317485 28 Nov 2003, 8:32 PM
We dont need an Antichrist to bring any apocalyptic end – we have our own Leaders to do the Job better then him
If mother is the the Earth - Who is the Father?? Dont tell me they are the same:o)
on It tells the time (a tribute to Roddy) by richa 28 Nov 2003, 8:45 AM
toad has a wrist boyo. That he does, but no watch:o)
replying on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 26 Nov 2003, 8:36 PM
Humbled as the bumble:o)
replying on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 26 Nov 2003, 6:09 AM
To those arses out there, about to or had read this crap - Hope u give it a freaking zero cause this piece is just JUST not me:o), if you know what the hack i mean
Ps: INTRANSIT i know u gonna pee like that dog, once u read this. Hope u do, but tell me abt it cause then ill know id have done something worthwhile:o)
on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 26 Nov 2003, 6:04 AM
This I dedicate to my friend, Babe, who had asked me why I did not write Love poetry, whence we first met – To her in reply I now say, Love poetry sound like a dog that pee’onto the hydrant; water to the water with a little more taste. Hence something I refrain of to save the gray matter for a better use.

Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
on Intersection by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2003, 1:37 AM
Well seems u have an affinity for daydreams and eye contest with the winged variety perched atop poles. Hope the fella deprives you of its droppings.
The stream of your words is grand till & after the verse ‘to this cross in time’
(mind, am not pointing fingers and saying its bad nor worse, but inferring it could be better) cause it give me pause to ponder a little of what you might have had in mind & what deviation from intent it had had.
But I find no cause not to relate this with a 10.
Ps, appreciate ya comments on my pieces – its critics like u I want & nothing like the friends that point a 10 & be content, as I be smiling my arse off, thinking the grand designs wrought by me hands. Just be honest & state you mind as u have in past. For it, I am & will be ever glade.
on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT 24 Nov 2003, 8:48 PM
INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
replying on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 24 Nov 2003, 8:43 PM
Better sit by that TV, INTRANSIT, its gonna help u understand a little of what i have said – How the darn protesters behave and the Adds are just as inane. You sud sit by me with a cup of coffee and just waste a good hour by the tube – then stand take a deep breath and say what ever your heart desires. I am a 100& plenty on the fact that u gonna grin, pat me on me back and say – ShaNoN, thnx for opening my eyes:o)
replying on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 24 Nov 2003, 8:34 PM
:o)
replying on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 24 Nov 2003, 8:09 PM
Advertiser and Protestants do little research; they just start of with what they can get their hands on:o)
on Ode to my Poopy by Samantha 24 Nov 2003, 6:22 AM
:o)
on Wanting by Samantha 24 Nov 2003, 6:20 AM
Hope u be wanting 2 say no more:o)
on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 23 Nov 2003, 9:56 PM
Advertisements is in part a two faced bitch.



Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
on Synergy by searching 20 Nov 2003, 10:22 AM
u better keep searching, cause me think this gold is mine:o)
on untitled #2 by venusdemilo 20 Nov 2003, 7:09 AM
:o)
on What is Gold by mojoro23 20 Nov 2003, 6:49 AM
yea that all sound kinda right:o)