Re: a comment on In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485 |
18-Dec-03/10:01 AM |
of which i hope u hv the total sum 2, cause i have it all n much more:o)
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Re: In my train-IN by ShaNoN+960317485 |
16-Dec-03/11:45 PM |
Srry that i cant b here in Poemranker more often - been in a training n still am. Hope 2 read ya guys/gals stuff once i finish this arse grinding.
Cheers friends
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Re: An Ode to Gobbling by horus8 |
29-Nov-03/4:53 AM |
good insanity in a big bang:o)
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Re: People of Discord by ShaNoN+960317485 |
28-Nov-03/8:32 PM |
We dont need an Antichrist to bring any apocalyptic end â we have our own Leaders to do the Job better then him
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Re: A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser |
28-Nov-03/8:16 PM |
If mother is the the Earth - Who is the Father?? Dont tell me they are the same:o)
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Re: It tells the time (a tribute to Roddy) by richa |
28-Nov-03/8:45 AM |
toad has a wrist boyo. That he does, but no watch:o)
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Re: a comment on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 |
26-Nov-03/8:36 PM |
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Re: a comment on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 |
26-Nov-03/6:09 AM |
To those arses out there, about to or had read this crap - Hope u give it a freaking zero cause this piece is just JUST not me:o), if you know what the hack i mean
Ps: INTRANSIT i know u gonna pee like that dog, once u read this. Hope u do, but tell me abt it cause then ill know id have done something worthwhile:o)
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Re: My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 |
26-Nov-03/6:04 AM |
This I dedicate to my friend, Babe, who had asked me why I did not write Love poetry, whence we first met â To her in reply I now say, Love poetry sound like a dog that peeâonto the hydrant; water to the water with a little more taste. Hence something I refrain of to save the gray matter for a better use.
Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
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Re: Intersection by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-03/1:37 AM |
Well seems u have an affinity for daydreams and eye contest with the winged variety perched atop poles. Hope the fella deprives you of its droppings.
The stream of your words is grand till & after the verse âto this cross in timeâ
(mind, am not pointing fingers and saying its bad nor worse, but inferring it could be better) cause it give me pause to ponder a little of what you might have had in mind & what deviation from intent it had had.
But I find no cause not to relate this with a 10.
Ps, appreciate ya comments on my pieces â its critics like u I want & nothing like the friends that point a 10 & be content, as I be smiling my arse off, thinking the grand designs wrought by me hands. Just be honest & state you mind as u have in past. For it, I am & will be ever glade.
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Re: Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT |
24-Nov-03/8:48 PM |
INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
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Re: a comment on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
24-Nov-03/8:43 PM |
Better sit by that TV, INTRANSIT, its gonna help u understand a little of what i have said â How the darn protesters behave and the Adds are just as inane. You sud sit by me with a cup of coffee and just waste a good hour by the tube â then stand take a deep breath and say what ever your heart desires. I am a 100& plenty on the fact that u gonna grin, pat me on me back and say â ShaNoN, thnx for opening my eyes:o)
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Re: a comment on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
24-Nov-03/8:34 PM |
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Re: a comment on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
24-Nov-03/8:09 PM |
Advertiser and Protestants do little research; they just start of with what they can get their hands on:o)
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Re: Ode to my Poopy by Samantha |
24-Nov-03/6:22 AM |
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Re: Wanting by Samantha |
24-Nov-03/6:20 AM |
Hope u be wanting 2 say no more:o)
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Re: An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
23-Nov-03/9:56 PM |
Advertisements is in part a two faced bitch.
Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
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Re: Synergy by searching |
20-Nov-03/10:22 AM |
u better keep searching, cause me think this gold is mine:o)
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Re: untitled #2 by venusdemilo |
20-Nov-03/7:09 AM |
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Re: What is Gold by mojoro23 |
20-Nov-03/6:49 AM |
yea that all sound kinda right:o)
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