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What is Gold (Lyric) by mojoro23
What is Gold by Michelle Olsen April 26, 2001 9 YOA Gold is a gold fish swimming in the sea. Gold is a buttercup bursting to be free. Gold is a watch time ticking away. Gold is a necklace shining in the day. Gold is a ring sparkling in the light. Saturn spinning in the black, black night.

Up the ladder: Hands
Down the ladder: Stubborn Lips

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7370
Posted: July 29, 2002 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 2:43 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 22-Aug-02/10:11 AM | Reply
Have you heard the Splendour of Gold argument for the existence of God, my childe?
[n/a] mojoro23 @ | 22-Aug-02/1:28 PM | Reply
No!
[9] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 20-Nov-03/6:49 AM | Reply
yea that all sound kinda right:o)
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