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Stubborn Lips

by kazeaki

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

What would appease your sour lips And cause curl toward heaven again? I would even look Medusa in the eye (And remain unpretentious) For when I put my pucker to your lemon brow The pucker is exaggerated. And I wish your lips taste sweetly And their corners chipper-turned.

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[7] horus8 30-Jul-02/11:19 PM Reply
i once new a chipper from boston
he chipped he was straight down to austin.with ice pick in hand
he conquered the land when he seduced donald p halstonn