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Stubborn Lips (Free verse) by kazeaki
What would appease your sour lips And cause curl toward heaven again? I would even look Medusa in the eye (And remain unpretentious) For when I put my pucker to your lemon brow The pucker is exaggerated. And I wish your lips taste sweetly And their corners chipper-turned.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7374
Posted: July 30, 2002 9:10 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 9:10 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-Jul-02/11:19 PM | Reply
i once new a chipper from boston
he chipped he was straight down to austin.with ice pick in hand
he conquered the land when he seduced donald p halstonn
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