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An Unusual Elegy (Free verse) by psychedelic
The crystal was pure, the crystal is broken
Innocence is lost, never to return
Slowly my eyes filled with tears
Your wails haunt me deep in the night
They pain me, but I never shall shut my eyes and ears
They pain me, and my eyes are filled with tears
It's not love that puts oneself before the other
It's never love, my friend
Yet now you are his, and your eyes are filled with tears
Promise me you won't stare at tomorrow with empty eyes
Promise me this, and I will bleed for you
I would hate to see you through the years???
with your eyes filled with tears.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7375
Posted: August 4, 2002 12:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 12:36 AM PDT
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