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An Unusual Elegy (Free verse) by psychedelic
The crystal was pure, the crystal is broken Innocence is lost, never to return Slowly my eyes filled with tears Your wails haunt me deep in the night They pain me, but I never shall shut my eyes and ears They pain me, and my eyes are filled with tears It's not love that puts oneself before the other It's never love, my friend Yet now you are his, and your eyes are filled with tears Promise me you won't stare at tomorrow with empty eyes Promise me this, and I will bleed for you I would hate to see you through the years??? with your eyes filled with tears.

Up the ladder: Stubborn Lips
Down the ladder: birds

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7375
Posted: August 4, 2002 12:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 12:36 AM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Aug-02/12:44 AM | Reply
Feeling a little moody this evening? Zanex is the quicker picker upper downer. kale.hoof.beak.fountainn
[9] hendrimike @ 70.106.122.122 | 7-Jun-05/9:16 PM | Reply
loved it...<9>
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