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birds (Free verse) by pjenkins
the birds are laughing we should be wondering what we are doing wrong. all this time we thought them singing and ignored them as if our own. but they are above us in more ways than one and i think i can hear them laughing.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7376
Posted: August 5, 2002 1:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2002 1:42 PM PDT
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[5] titan69 @ 195.93.48.153 | 5-Aug-02/2:41 PM | Reply
you are wright thay are laughing
[6] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 7-Sep-02/11:47 PM | Reply
cute. flow could use some work.
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