poemranker ::Testament by PawnedTidal

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Free verse № 9724

Testament

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

I've nothing to leave Save these words. To continue like this Would be so absurd. It isn't your fault-- Only my own. I'm no longer able To call this life 'Home.' I longed for a gentle voice, Or a calming hand. Unheard and unfelt-- There was no one to understand. My cries for help Went unanswered; unappreciated. Loneliness was underscored, And unhappiness unabated.

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[8] *Lyrisick* 23-Sep-02/4:13 PM Reply
I can tell that you write with emotions, as I do. I feel you on this one.