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What is Gold (Lyric) by mojoro23

What is Gold by Michelle Olsen April 26, 2001 9 YOA Gold is a gold fish swimming in the sea. Gold is a buttercup bursting to be free. Gold is a watch time ticking away. Gold is a necklace shining in the day. Gold is a ring sparkling in the light. Saturn spinning in the black, black night.

ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:49 AM
yea that all sound kinda right:o)




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