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Hands (Free verse) by frostygirl
Bulging viens Your masculinity dripping In a subconscious puddle At my feet Hold my breath Your ruggedness Raw Like an anceint hunter Capable of so much evil That of a gun That of a spear Bare hands, such strength Yet gingerly Tenderly Strokes my cheek And reassures me of this world Such roughness Complimented by your compassion Gentle creature Noble soul The thickness of your fingers Feels so good along my spine I shiver with such passion Instinctual to your touch

Up the ladder: Mellow
Down the ladder: What is Gold

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7369
Posted: July 28, 2002 12:31 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 12:31 PM PDT
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[7] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.68.113 | 28-Jul-02/6:22 PM | Reply
Look honey if it weren't for the gun and the spear we'd all be eating berries and morels right now
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 10-Nov-03/1:05 AM | Reply
That's the slut in you going for seconds.
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