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My Love Letter (Free verse) by ShaNoN+960317485
I sharpen the pencil in idle form
Tarrying to catch the heart that flutter
Like the butterfly in flight in storm
Yet my mind is held in stupor
So I sit here and think of a word
A word, or just a word or two
That I could scribe in bold
To express my love for you
With an exhale of my sigh aloud
A flicker of flame on candle locks
Threatened the darkness to loud
And compass the room with dark flocks
As I take up a pen to write my fret
My love, the pain ye have born in me
But as felt-tip to paper I dare to set
Words of sort dash to hide from me
But alas they be hid of me the man
Whoâd have wrought ye a canvas
Hath the silver of tongues beân with me
For fear the letter be shallow of what I felt for thee
Love I say to thee like onesâ love for breath
Precious as the opals and gems but precious more
Dear as the drowning mans wishes to breathe
Cherished as the childâs innocence that snores
I most of my time to this letter relish witâut adieu
For I am but not sure of your reprove clause
So I bide my time to the point in time and pause
To reflect and stay the moment in my iris door
In dream of this wake, with ripples of it warped
I lay a smile in its make of the thoughts arisen
Of your eyes if I am asked
Subtle brown, the hue of gold
Radiant as the Lilacs blush
Dappled in a shade of blue
But these are but words of a troubled mind
no more nor less, but wanting something more
Wrought mayhap to snare your heart with its limbo
So to settle the score in words I try grab
The words of lore in ages past I must again ensue
Free of thoughtful conjunctions and phrase
Prose of words and artful facts its hold not in use
But it doth reach the want in my breast thatâs born
The simple words that spring in tongues oâ lovers gone
Sweetest sonnet of them all, is the breath of, âI Love Youâ
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Weighted score: 4.3084364
Overall Rank: 13128
Posted: November 26, 2003 5:56 AM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2003 5:56 AM PST
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Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
Ps: INTRANSIT i know u gonna pee like that dog, once u read this. Hope u do, but tell me abt it cause then ill know id have done something worthwhile:o)