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A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) (Free verse) by Rainbow_chaser Oh mother, please forgive me
I have ignored you for so very long,
I have blamed, denied and mistrusted you
I had forgotten you, for reasons all wrong.
I was lost in a deep dark well in the gap,
In a fog of loneliness and pain,
So easy it was to loss the balance
I now fight so hard to regain.
I realize by denying you mother
i was denying myself as well,
When i was lost in the dark, the difference
in directions were so difficult to tell.
Much healing must take place now
For we have alot of work to do,
I know now the cause of my loneliness
was me trying to live without you.
So Mother And Father I ask that
you hold me in your loving embrace,
Help me find the balance and strength
to this work with grace.
Written by: Autumn Dawe??
May 22, 2002.
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Posted: July 29, 2002 2:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 2:42 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5827065 Overall Rank: 2336 Comments:
If mother is the the Earth - Who is the Father?? Dont tell me they are the same:o)
Well Mother earth being the female polar aspect, that would leave father creator as the male polar aspect..would it not?
hence the phraze "mother earth father sky". if you really look around you will find a polar balance in everything, it is the key to healing all. hope this helped ;)
This absolutely beautiful.
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"Practice"..well they say it makes perfect, at 26 i see myself with the rest of my life to grow learn and evolve towards "Better". Reading well one could never read or learn enough. As for the weak writtings..... i must say this, true strength is found in utter weakness, if one would only look around and grow from each experiance.... well then all could benifit from alittle weakness.
i must also add this, in every writting that comes from the heart or soul of every person. You will find a check point for every step along a path in their lives, and looking back years later over recorded thought, emotion and experiance. It is a very sobering realization of the growth that one can make in a small amount of time. So look at it as a growth chart, a positive force to continue moving forward on your path.
I write not for the praise of another i write and share some of what i feel and endure in hopes of perhaps letting another (who might be at that very same check point on their own path) Know they are not alone, that we all feel.... 90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are..........?
Now, that is sound advice.
True strength is found in weakness?
I suppose true growth is then found in non-growth?
Where did you come up with your 90% figure? I suppose you fancy yourself one of the 10%.
We, as sentient, adult beings, think in words. You think poorly.
"90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are"
You could not be more wrong about this.
Hmmmmm.... awfully strange that you think she is right about something that YOU inserted into her comment. What are the chances?
the loose, imprecise nature of her writing in this comment should have shown me that her exact words are not important...??
Please tell me you were joking when you wrote that.
Then you go on to tell me that she meant something other than what I read in some language approximating plain English, because you are so much better equipped than I am to decode her? Fucking laughable. Absolutely pathetic.
~Autumn