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A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) (Free verse) by Rainbow_chaser

Oh mother, please forgive me I have ignored you for so very long, I have blamed, denied and mistrusted you I had forgotten you, for reasons all wrong. I was lost in a deep dark well in the gap, In a fog of loneliness and pain, So easy it was to loss the balance I now fight so hard to regain. I realize by denying you mother i was denying myself as well, When i was lost in the dark, the difference in directions were so difficult to tell. Much healing must take place now For we have alot of work to do, I know now the cause of my loneliness was me trying to live without you. So Mother And Father I ask that you hold me in your loving embrace, Help me find the balance and strength to this work with grace. Written by: Autumn Dawe?? May 22, 2002.

Rainbow_chaser

8-Mar-05/7:53 PM

yes i am aware my writting comes across weak at times, but i do write to move inner emotional blocks. I dont dream of ever going anywhere with my writtings, as you can obviously see i have little schooling. Writting to me is mearly a movment, a vent, a release of emotion, thought or experiances perhaps to painful to move safely in any other way.... behind our fronts we place as a safe guard........we are all human beings, striving to hide the obvious. Pretending to stride through life unscathed, when the majority bearly hold togeather enough to bringforth and follow through with why it is they are here to begin with.
"Practice"..well they say it makes perfect, at 26 i see myself with the rest of my life to grow learn and evolve towards "Better". Reading well one could never read or learn enough. As for the weak writtings..... i must say this, true strength is found in utter weakness, if one would only look around and grow from each experiance.... well then all could benifit from alittle weakness.
i must also add this, in every writting that comes from the heart or soul of every person. You will find a check point for every step along a path in their lives, and looking back years later over recorded thought, emotion and experiance. It is a very sobering realization of the growth that one can make in a small amount of time. So look at it as a growth chart, a positive force to continue moving forward on your path.
I write not for the praise of another i write and share some of what i feel and endure in hopes of perhaps letting another (who might be at that very same check point on their own path) Know they are not alone, that we all feel.... 90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are..........?

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