| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Karma (Other) by blankel The New Age folks all say it's true
that life goes on for me and you
Don't think it's over at the end
Since when we die we start again
Another time to make mistakes
We get a different set of breaks
sometimes they're good, sometimes they're bad
depending on the life we've had
And in the karmic scheme of things
the shit from last time seems to cling
and makes our lives a smelly mess
But we don't know, so on we press
to find we're paying once again
Though this is now, and that was then
But based on all that I've been through
There's nothing left for me to do
I fear no comfort's to be found
I was a prick last time around
Up the ladder:
The Funnyman
Down the ladder:
A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.586207
Posted: February 18, 2003 6:01 PM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2003 6:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.5847573 Overall Rank: 2335 Comments:
[10]
horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
|
18-Feb-03/6:41 PM
|
Reply
You have exceptional timing, but your poetry? creditcard's 3.00$? to view your web page and poetry? what are you some kind of fucking uppity elitist jew? you should fucking pay people three dollars to read this shit. three dollars a fucking second, idiot.
almost funny. almost serious. tough to do well. the rhyme scheme makes it hard to take seriously.
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooocare
Interesting spin on the pimple poem.
luv it, 10
PPPPPPPPPPPPPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRICK!
Aptly put! And it rhymes, too. Right on!
Splendid!
The end was funny... ^_^ The cyclic thing kinda depresses me sometimes... I'd rather for it to just stop, rather than to die and then wake up and have to do it all over again.
Love it and I hope that isn't true, but I think it is.
congrats on starting high school next year!!!!
HA too true.
I don't think Karma is real. But I like your poem
You don't think karma is real, but you're a Sufi? Are you sure? Or maybe not? Do a lot of things go over your head? Or is that mentally impossible? Do you like carrots? Is big foot really in possession of abnormally large feet? Is it easier to measurea stars magnitude or an earthquakes. If you've attempted to answer any of these questions mentally, to yourself, before reaching this question, do not fret, I really am not that interested in your answers.
I knew this guy in high school. Nice guy. One of the nicest, a good hippie in the suburbs. The guy wouldn't hurt a fly if it was spitting acid on his nuts. He bought a VW bus painted in splotches of every color, thrown on. Beautiful bus. The first day he had it burned to the ground in the school parking lot, taking with it everything he needed to graduate. That's Karma.
I REALLY like this poem!!! I don't care what anyone else says, You've got it together! LOL theres no need to say anything else!
I have a friend who is really into all that Karma stuff, but personally I'm not into karma or life after death or anything like that. Just wanted to say that your poem flowed pretty good tho.
269 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
