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A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) (Free verse) by Rainbow_chaser

Oh mother, please forgive me I have ignored you for so very long, I have blamed, denied and mistrusted you I had forgotten you, for reasons all wrong. I was lost in a deep dark well in the gap, In a fog of loneliness and pain, So easy it was to loss the balance I now fight so hard to regain. I realize by denying you mother i was denying myself as well, When i was lost in the dark, the difference in directions were so difficult to tell. Much healing must take place now For we have alot of work to do, I know now the cause of my loneliness was me trying to live without you. So Mother And Father I ask that you hold me in your loving embrace, Help me find the balance and strength to this work with grace. Written by: Autumn Dawe?? May 22, 2002.

edpeterson 17-Mar-05/7:20 PM
LOL. Nice dodge. If I am unable to make sense out of the parts, how can I determine what she is saying on the whole, short of making massive assumptions that may or may not be correct? How the fuck do you know what she means? Did she explain it to you privately? Are you one of those bible interpreters that changed "blessed are the poor" to "blessed are the poor in spirit"?

Hmmmmm.... awfully strange that you think she is right about something that YOU inserted into her comment. What are the chances?




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