Re: Cornerstone by darkshark	1-Jan-04/7:41 AM
sounds like a real catch. I like the refrain - you shall have a snowman (8)
Re: You tell me by Ariella	31-Dec-03/10:43 PM
peppered with error - and it needs salt.
Re: advice to innovators by (m)ee cummings by irishfolksuicide	31-Dec-03/10:39 PM
She mite, then she mite not, though if she tried with all her mite, she mite - but only if she had the rite foresite to make it at the rite time in spite of [that other guy]'s rite to smite the mite, am I rite? Not quite.
Re: How to spend New Years in denial by Bachus	31-Dec-03/10:29 PM
bummer dude, bummer.
Re: The Beach by Evening	29-Dec-03/5:03 AM
Quite nice as is, but I kept wanting to reform it in my mind as I read - prolly cuz we haven't had one like it in a while. lots of very common verbs, not sure if I like that (looked, turned, walked, watched) - dunno - i like it overall nonetheless.
Re: Santa’s Journal 25thDec2003 by ShaNoN+960317485	29-Dec-03/4:55 AM
"quelling giggles" - nice
Re: Beauty Sleep by Blindpoetry	28-Dec-03/6:45 PM
somehow - sad.
Re: Add More Oil by heartlessempath	28-Dec-03/6:43 PM
I like this talk of a girl in water, with oil. and I like the poem - I want to give it a nine. so, I will.
Re: I cant stand you by sk8rs_rule_all	28-Dec-03/6:39 PM
"You make me mad when i should be glad." "Just die aready, i wont cry i'll laugh. I'll be glad, and no longer mad!!!" classic pimple.
Re: a comment on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer	28-Dec-03/6:17 PM
(persons, places or things) stiletto s2, stiletto s7 rosary s2, rosary s4.
Re: We Are Still Friends by Blindpoetry	27-Dec-03/10:02 PM
yep. thats a pimple alright. good ending.
Re: Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer	27-Dec-03/10:01 PM
I liked "and well-thumbed rosary" but not the repeated noun. Same with stiletto. I like the characterization lots, you know, that you gave her a name.
Re: Live for Die for by firestorm998	27-Dec-03/9:58 PM
Certainly a nice idea - but the execution... Despite Richa's [everpresent] sour tone, I agree with him.
Re: a comment on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Dec-03/5:54 AM
Well - as long as your mother stays... ;O)
Re: a comment on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Dec-03/8:27 PM
Okay - what the hell, I'm a member. Just joined a contest.
Re: a comment on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Dec-03/8:04 PM
I think I've been there, it's not part of my "rounds" - any good?
Re: 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Dec-03/7:04 PM
Yep. It put me in the moment. Somehow I found myself trying to think of a different last line. I don't know if it was me enjoying the aftertaste; imagining possibilities/extending the vision - or a hunger pain. Did you try other ones?
Re: Mixed Feelings by PunkyPanda	20-Dec-03/6:55 PM
i'd like to see the sentiment without any attemps at making it rhyme.
Re: I Love You by Blindpoetry	20-Dec-03/6:53 PM
I don't know, spence... I doesn't say much more that what's said in the title alone.
Re: All the rain has fallen by fair12	17-Dec-03/12:08 PM
winter as a loss of reason - love it.