poemranker ::Mixed Feelings by PunkyPanda

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Free verse № 78024

Mixed Feelings

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

No one likes the feeing of jealousy...no one at all It sometime feels like there's no ground under you, and all that is left is to fall. Jealousy will make you angr sometimes, maybe it'll make you cry, but I hide my feelings dee inside, through my soul you'd have to pry. To get these feelings hard like stone, some should just remain unknown. Don't forget I have feelings too! And for them being hurt, I blame it all on you! YOu'll never hav my heart again, you'll never have my trust. In it all it was love and care, all you chose was lust, but don't worrie, you'll never see me cry for I keep these feelings deep inside, through my soul you'd have to pry. Don't forget I have feelings too! And for them being hurt, I blame it all on you!

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3 comments

[6] Shuushin 20-Dec-03/6:55 PM Reply

i'd like to see the sentiment without any attemps at making it rhyme.
[10] nothingtoanyone 5-Jan-04/10:23 AM Reply
I m so sorry i read this and didnt tell you how much I liked so I ll tell you now I like it this much ______________________________________________________
[1] cheese.doodles 26-Apr-07/4:22 PM Reply
spelling mistakes and cliches totally ruin an already mediocre piece.