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Mixed Feelings (Free verse) by PunkyPanda
No one likes the feeing of jealousy...no one at all It sometime feels like there's no ground under you, and all that is left is to fall. Jealousy will make you angr sometimes, maybe it'll make you cry, but I hide my feelings dee inside, through my soul you'd have to pry. To get these feelings hard like stone, some should just remain unknown. Don't forget I have feelings too! And for them being hurt, I blame it all on you! YOu'll never hav my heart again, you'll never have my trust. In it all it was love and care, all you chose was lust, but don't worrie, you'll never see me cry for I keep these feelings deep inside, through my soul you'd have to pry. Don't forget I have feelings too! And for them being hurt, I blame it all on you!

Up the ladder: untitled rubiayait 2
Down the ladder: if really its me

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9629
Posted: December 19, 2003 1:06 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 1:06 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 20-Dec-03/6:55 PM | Reply

i'd like to see the sentiment without any attemps at making it rhyme.
[10] nothingtoanyone @ 65.125.114.157 | 5-Jan-04/10:23 AM | Reply
I m so sorry i read this and didnt tell you how much I liked so I ll tell you now I like it this much ______________________________________________________
[1] cheese.doodles @ 76.64.14.95 | 26-Apr-07/4:22 PM | Reply
spelling mistakes and cliches totally ruin an already mediocre piece.
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