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You Left Your Brownies (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 This happiness beyond comparison
Sprung from a night of passion
So fulfilling I can barely contain my joy
I smile sweetly when the memories
Twist inside me
I want to kiss you again
Before I wake in a world gone mad.
For when I lay here with you time ceases.
And the sun doesnât rise,
Until you leave.
Then reality sinks in, and I
Must conquer the greater evils
That grow with time.
So kiss me one last time
Before you leave so I can enjoy
These last few moments
Of bliss before corruption settles in
To taint the day
jg
Up the ladder:
It's True
Down the ladder:
Poe ét tri
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Posted: November 5, 2003 5:19 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:34 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9598 Comments:
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sliver @ 65.178.200.179
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5-Nov-03/8:10 PM
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And what's with the play on Lucifer? I always expect something satanic from you.
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.30.210
> sliver
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8-Nov-03/8:20 AM
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CHECK MY EARLIER POSTINGS... i PUT SOMETHING SATANIC UP EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE NOWADAYS. THE NAME IS MOSTLY THE DETRIMENTAL AFFECT i HAVE ON MOST SITUATIONS AND INDIVIDUALS
Corruption to me, is a slow steady leaky faucet in your bathtub, and a handful of rats turning it into an water park while all are sleeping.
Lucy..lucy..lucy that spark i enjoy your work in the sky with diamonds..so i'll leave you a lip biting kiss and twoo wellbutrins on your pillow..OMMMMMMMM
What's with the brownies?
I wrote this after having a good time with him and I was making him brownies just about once a week. He left them because he'd forgotten about them and so had I. I'd hidden them as insentive for his "being a good boy"
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